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How To Stay Focused On Your Songwriting

August 28th, 2008 orlando5 No comments

With all the daily stress going on in our lives, it’s terribly easy to lose focus on our songwriting.  This can sometimes result in gradually losing interest for our love of the craft of songwriting.  It seems like many aspiring songwriters become intensely interested in songwriting only to lose interest after learning the basics and putting in a great amount of effort, saying they just don’t have the time or the energy because of prior commitments, rehearsals, studio work, etc., and, hey, our drummer is our songwriter, so we’re perfectly okay with that! 

I don’t care what anybody says, if you’re someone struggling to pay the rent or mortgage, barely staying afloat, eating nothing but peanut butter and jelly sandwiches 4 days before payday, you’re eventually going to hit a wall!  But, hey! Many of us have been there!  I know I have.  I know what it’s like to wonder how to make it through another few days without starving, losing my shelter, and/or going berserk.

If you’re someone who needs a little push right now to get you back on track for whatever reason or to simply get you started in songwriting, understand the following:

1.  Songwriting can actually be a spiritual process in which your original creations can actually lift your spirits up higher than almost anything on this planet.  If you don’t believe me, ask a local musician how he felt after writing a certain song you enjoyed at his last show or set. 

2.  Songwriting is one of the most inexpensive musical roads anyone can take.  It usually requires your mind, a good songwriting book, a pencil, and a pad to get you started.  Average start-up cost = 20.00 (this doesn’t include your mind-that’s priceless of course!)

3.  I’m a fellow songwriter and I’m counting on you to continue developing as a songwriter just as I have always try to do, so that we can all be a strong link in a worldwide chain of songwriters for the betterment of this beautiful craft of songwriting throughout the world. 

No excuses.  Do it for yourself.  Do it for the love of songwriting.  Do it for all of mankind.  The world needs songwriters and that includes you!  Without songwriters the only melody we would hear is a monotonic middle “C” note on a piano hanging onto the airwaves!  Because of us, people can actually enjoy a flurry of melodically masterful notes dancing through the airwaves!

We all need each other. Let’s go!!!

Advanced Songwriting Tips – Creating Powerful Opening Verse Lines – Part 2

July 17th, 2008 orlando5 No comments

In Pt 1 of this series, we learned how to construct phrases relating directly to the song’s title in order to create captivating opening lines in our first verses.

As I’ve said before, our favorite songs actually contain much valuable information when it comes to learning the craft of songwriting, so the next method of creating powerful opening lines in your verses probably won’t come as a surprise.

An outstanding way to never run out of ideas is to take the first line or two of every song you’d like to analyze, and make a list, describing what the line is generally saying.

 
Here’s an example taking songs from the current top ten on the Billboard Pop Charts:

1. This was never the way I planned
     Not my intention

 <……………………………from Katy Perry’s “I Kissed A Girl”

The two opening lines make reference to “What I didn’t expect,” because the lines say it wasn’t the way I planned it and it wasn’t my intention (it was totally unexpected).  So, using this idea, if I titled a song, “Leave Me In The Dust,” my opening line could be something like, “The shock of your disappearing act hasn’t sunk in yet.”     

Here’s another example:

2. You look so dumb right now,
     Standin’ outside my house

<……………………………from Rihanna’s “Take A Bow”

You can categorize these two opening lines as “What does he, she, or they look like?” as it relates to the song’s idea or title.   Well in this song, the guy looks dumb as he’s standing outside her house.

As another example, in George Strait’s country song titled “You Look So Good In Love,”  the first lines are, “Oh how you sparkle, Oh how you shine, That flush on your checks is more than the wine.”   In both songs, the singer is setting up the plot of the song by painting a picture of “What that someone in their song looks like.”

3.  So now we’ve studied two opening lines of songs. 
On a lined sheet of paper, title it “Opening Line Ideas” and start listing the opening line ideas on the top line:

Opening Line Ideas

 

 

What I didn’t expect
What he looks like

 

 Let’s continue building this list with the following song’s first two lines:

4. I probably shouldn’t say this
     But at times I get so scared

<…………………………….Miley Cyrus’s “7 Things”

Pretty simple two lines, right?  We can categorize this one as “What happens to me (or you, or them, etc.)” or “What kind of feeling do I get?”

 So, if we continue our Opening Lines Idea sheet it will now look like this:

 

What I didn’t expect
What he looks like
What happens to me
What kind of feeling do I get

******You can always substitute the pronouns with other pronouns.  I.e., in “What I didn’t expect” you can use the idea ,”What he didn’t expect, what you didn’t expect, what they didn’t expect, etc.  

 As you can see, the possibilities are endless.  Use this article as your starting point and keep building ideas by studying the first two lines of songs, and you’ll never run out of strong opening line ideas!

By the way, this method often generates great song titles, too!